Is the rom working with the new touchscreen? Because if the answer is yes, the OC patch should work too, because the only difference is CPU Speed. Have in mind this is the rom for g58. Could it be your device is a G5A? I don't have parameters for new screen of g58, so I cannot make a new kernel for g58 new screen.
g58 is the less overclockable GPD device, so perhaps your device doesn't handle the overclock and it doesn't boot for that reason.